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Life is a hallway
A physical portal to elsewhere
A long passage way leading on
A space between all spaces

You aren't where you've been
You aren't where you will be

Sometimes, you just wander

Sometimes you're alone,
and your footsteps just echo

Sometimes your in a crowd,
and you can't even see where you're going

Maybe you find someone
Make someone
Lose someone
Take someone away

Though it's never truly the end
A hallway is just a means to the end
Maybe you enter into hapiness,
Maybe you don't-

Maybe you just keeping wandering,
Until you run out of space

A man walks down a hall to see his new son;
Another man walks down a hall to be executed

Is it all relative, in the grand scheme of things?
Or does it matter, where we walk, how we walk?
©2008-2010 ~are-we-worth-saving
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Author's Comments

I've never been good at writing on topics chosen by others, but I'll give it a shot. My submission to the Literati contest, leave comments/criticisms.

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:iconjanel1707:
this has a really nice calming quality
and flows nicely
really well done :-)

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:iconirrevocablefate:
I agree with Janel1707, it flows very nicely and it gives a very tranquil effect. I love the theme and how you compared life to a hallway, there is always someone walking it. Nice job! ^^

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Hello world! I love you. :eager:
:iconare-we-worth-saving:
Thanks, I usually do a botched job on these kinds of things; good to hear some affrimation.

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'...My voice just echoes on these walls'
:iconirrevocablefate:
You are most welcome! Ah, well in this you succeeded! Great job! ^^

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Hello world! I love you. :eager:

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